Screen shots of what i need to change in the film

Here are some screenshots of what I . need to reshoot or change. When I originally went to shoot with George, It was just myself, my mam and him. He isn't an actor but took direction really well. Well, when i say that he was hard work!!! He got easily distracted which would be expected when you ask someone to do like 15 takes of the same shot!!!

- If we were to film again, would be easier if Alex could be there so we could film at the same time, allowing us to get the same exact shot/dialogue but at  different angle. Would also speed up the process.

 

- When looking at the footage on IMovie, you can tell that the footage in the dark isn't as clear as the ones in the light. It would be desirable for the footage not to pixelise because of how dark it is but to keep the same darkness and clarity.

- The door is open and the previous shot it isn't.
- Will have to change this but if we don't have time it isn't too obvious.

- I love this gentle high angled pan to the left
- It was a nice angle which has connotations of inferiority and vulnerability
- I'm not sure if it looked too shaky in the beginning of the clip though.


- There wasn't anything particularly wrong with this shot
- Just out of focus
- Could use it if i can't redo the shots.




- This sequence is when George comes to the left
- It's a high angle, left pan
- Bit shaky
- Could do with another take

- - This is a still shot of George moving to the right
- Static shot
- Could do with a diff angle
- Maybe his face in it?

- I had to speed this clip because it didn't seem to urgent
- Needed it to seem realistic
- Redo if possible // I like the lighting.

- Good shot
- If the actor could - get him to redo it
- Needs to look more natural but at the end of the day he isn't an actor

- The rocking seems too fake
- Need to get it to look less solid and more fluid like he is actually scared

- This shot is with my mam
- Dialogue is on the top
- Will work but the rocking is still too hard